Campion

@moodybookfreak   No problem!!!  I actually fanned you because I loved the beginning of your story The Unspoken Words of Arcadia Dream.  I wasn’t able to write a review earlier because I was in a rush, but I can’t wait for you to post more!  Everything about it is just so original (the title, for example, immediately intrigued me, and I loved the part about the tree!).  Anyways, cliffhanger!!!  =)  The one thing I would say as constructive criticism is watch your sentence lengths...  I realized that a lot of them were run on sentences, which I can totally relate to.  Overall, its a pretty minor issue, just something to look out for.  Like I said, all in all I love the story line and I look forward to your next post!
          	
          	~ Campion  =D

MidnightAria

Campion! Sorry for not replying on Wordpress (I just got your email while I was studying for an exam, so I added it to my "Read later" pile but then completely forgot).
          As for me, I'm going great, thank you. A couple of exams here and there, and then it's all over. :D Can't wait until the holidays; I have a whole booklet of philosophy (literally) to learn. But I love it, so it's all good. xD
          How about you? Do you have school right now? :)

Campion

@moodybookfreak   No problem!!!  I actually fanned you because I loved the beginning of your story The Unspoken Words of Arcadia Dream.  I wasn’t able to write a review earlier because I was in a rush, but I can’t wait for you to post more!  Everything about it is just so original (the title, for example, immediately intrigued me, and I loved the part about the tree!).  Anyways, cliffhanger!!!  =)  The one thing I would say as constructive criticism is watch your sentence lengths...  I realized that a lot of them were run on sentences, which I can totally relate to.  Overall, its a pretty minor issue, just something to look out for.  Like I said, all in all I love the story line and I look forward to your next post!
          
          ~ Campion  =D