To Be Done

Something to ask.

So lately, I've been wondering if I should continue this story. I feel like the quality of my work is going down exponentially. This is a check-up, I'm not ending it by any means, I like the story. It's just I don't know if y'all do.

I planned for twenty chapters because I didn't actually expect to make it to ten, but now that I'm past twenty, I think it might end at thirty-forty chapters.

I am also for every chapter I do post another is updated and reformed so that it's a lot less choppy and hard to understand. So my question, well I don't know why it was titled: "Something to ask." 

Just hear me out, I like writing little stories out. But I question if my work's decent, okay, or if yall just want me to leave right now. 

So here goes nothing. 

Is it good?

Is the concept okay?

I want to know if I could fix any mistakes.

Do you dislike the way the characters are written, or do you just not care as much?

Is there something missing that'll make it better?

This isn't supposed to be really long, I just needed some clarification. I know this might sound childish, and that's fine. I'm just a high schooler still in school. I don't take offense to what you're saying I welcome it. 

So if there's anything you'd like me to do to improve my abilities just comment and I'll see it.